The title could be something different because the only line that relates to it is the last one. This is like poetically asking someone out, right? Because that's what I think it is. It's really good, but at the end you kinda let the whole poem let go wit the "go out" part. It doesn't completely ruin it though, it just lets down the momentum of the other brilliant lines.
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